Think. Siiggg

[nx.dcr]

V1


V2


Umm....? Idk.

Updated V2

[MZA]

text kinda kills :P
lol
its mainly the fact that it stands out SO much
first off, its quite big.....and secondly, there is nothing near it......so it draws more attention to itself.....

what u wanna try and do is add SOMETHING.....not too much or too little.....just the right amount, but add something on the LHS......i would suggest a C4D that flows well with the BG maybe set to lighten or screen or sumthing.....

also, that red in the text is kinda meh :P


generally, ure improving ALOT.....this one has a good layout and FX.....just work on ure text.....or if u CBA......just leave it out altogether.....

[floppybunny]

exactly what mza and stop b said. draw attention to ur render with some c4ds or fx.

but dayumm u improve soo fast =]

[nx.dcr]

thanks guys. i dont know why but i dont really use C4ds that often.... ill do that in a bit for V3.. but hows the text look now?

[MZA]

looks, IMO, better without text.....unless of course u could do something good with it.....

but now, like i said before, C4D's or sumthing needs to be added there......

[xWhite_Shadowx]

I like it, just too wide for the way u made it, i dont like the text in V1, needs to be closer to the focal, draw less attn... in my sigs i always use a small font similar to the bg and close to the render so that its there but it doesnt distract