Don't be mean Cereal >:O

You may want to try smudging to blend your Focal into the tag.

You also may want to try working on flow, meaning have everything go in one direction, as the background fractal is all crazy and there's no defined flow.

There also doesn't seem to be any depth, everything just looks sorta pasted in.

Color Balance isn't "needed" but it is strongly recommended, as the colors in the tag just don't go so well together, like there's a really light blue then a green-ish blue, and a dark blue.

I'm not too fond of the border either (is there even one?, looks like it on the left). You should go with a simple black border until you master which border helps the tag as opposed to hurt it.

Text Placement is critical, and I don't feel the "Ice Man" text goes well, because its black against white and draws too much attention away from the focal.

That's all I can think of, or am too lazy to think of more >.< good luck on future tags.