ok since u want me to stop being nice hers what i gotta say

-make the render bigger, u dont have to include the whole thing

-put more color into it

-maybe a better bg? a stock maybe?

-the pen toolin is really only supposed to use on focals that would look like they need it (i think)

maybe this just wasnt the right render for u, idk
I think it looks okay overall, i just wanted to help u improve lol sorry if i was rude/harsh
i like how u blended the axe thing though

maybe more blending? lighting?

anyways i know u can do better!! =] keep em comin