IMO
the 2nd is FREAKIN AWESOME
BUT
with the smudging
NEVER be afraid to erase sh*tty lookin areas or areas that just dont fit......
what im talkin about is this little bit on his left side of his face....
it covers the guys ear and just makes him look.....well.....like a freak :P
lol
also, some of his cap (on the back) is smudged over :S

sort that out, and it'll look so much better