Yet Another Masterpiece

[WhoIsYou]

Okay well I took a bit of everyone's advice and made something new, same idea though.
So what I did,
Cereal - Changed the text
SonniE - (not posted) fixed size
Grimm - Not blurred (smudged tho)
MZA - a lot.. took the render off the border, of course the big seph does have to pass over on top.., worked with the render to make the bg rather than just doing whatever,
Fixed border so it's more constant (Although different from the other one)

I was going to add something else but I couldn't get it right, maybe in the future though.. anyway here it is..

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[MZA]

the bg - IMO, is a lot better
the previous one was too chaotic for me
border is sweet and im glad the bg isnt blurred.....
its still obvious what the focal is though - which is of course a good thing


EDIT:
although the bg does need a lil bit more.....no too much so its like the previous one, but just a little.......
and yeah - i know u prob. didnt blur the focal (big seph), but it still looks low quality :P

[WhoIsYou]

I guess because it's small, and I did a bit of shadowing
But come on.. It's Sephiroth

As for the bg, what do you mean exactly by "a little bit more" a little bit more what I can't read minds

[Cereal_Man]

do u know what a focal is or do i explain it to u

[WhoIsYou]

do u know what a focal is or do i explain it to u

I believe I know what it is :S

[MZA]

a focal is the thing that your eyes should concentrate on most.....
it is the main part of the sig

anyhow
when i sai 'a lil bit more' - i meant that ATM, its a little empty......u 'over-smudged' the render so that the bg is just.....boring....
next time......dont totally smudge it so that there is no texture, u want the smudge strokes to be seen

[WhoIsYou]

Focal - Mhmm that's what I thought.

Bg- meh ah well.. first time i did it, can't be perfect >_<

[Scruffy120]

FF for the win!!

[MAD Industries]

Third one = Much better. =]