Looks good.
Only thing that stood out to me, is that the middle of sackboy looks too...pronounced. Like, the rest of him is blended in, and then the middle/focal just stands out a lil too much in my opinion.
i see what you mean i think its cuz of the huge smile, thanks for the comments
and dillion, i wud have tried adding more depth except for whenever i do, it makes a sig worse for me