http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/b...led-41copy.png
Printable View
heeyy actually that looks pretty good! i like it, its blended well. the flow is good!
i just think there should be some lighting and put ur name next to the face of the guy
actually there is no flow u can try working on that also try looking at some text tuts
i like the direction of the flow but we r all entitled to our own opinions so oh well
Cereal you never have anything good to say? Anyways, I did add lighting trust me the render was a lot darker... and thanks for your opinion flopp
I like it, probably your best :) (But i cant remember all of them :S)
at cereal :P
yeah there is flow :P
although it coul be improved on a lil.....
IMO, the text is kool where it is......it doesnt distract from the focal and it doesnt stand out much - perfect for comething like a name for 'protection'
the gun however seems a lil 'overblended', mainly due to its colour. IMO, it needs to stand out a lil more, but that may just be me....
Yeah I brushed it with a darker orange then added a clipping mask to the render and added a light effect to the chimera's face so it doesn't distract too much but that was probably a mistake...Quote:
Originally Posted by MZA
np wussy =] ahah
anyways, i still thinkthe text could be more next to the face of the kid but i like how its blended and the bg looks cool kinda like smokkey stuff. and still add lighting, since it doesnt look like there is but i believe that the render was much darker
i didnt say anything wrong
You said there was no flow... and you told me to read a text tutorial that's practically saying "You suck"
shoudnt that chimera`s armor b more blacker
i just said read a text tut because the text is ok but it can be better and i said there was no flow because there is hardly any so im practically telling u to work on it not that u suck.i never said anything wrong.ur the 1 that thinks that i am saying something wrong