My latest stuff. Open to critiquing (you to seven) you can be harsh idc. Its a start though
http://i606.photobucket.com/albums/t...5/Bioshock.jpg
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My latest stuff. Open to critiquing (you to seven) you can be harsh idc. Its a start though
http://i606.photobucket.com/albums/t...5/Bioshock.jpg
Sooo this is just a render on a background?
Try blend your focal a bit add effects areound it such as fractal, c4ds or brushes. Your text is not needed here but it does kind of hide the negative space a bit. But if your going to ever put text on a tag NEVER put outer glow on it, the chances of outerglow looking good on a tag is like 0.01%
Overall: Fill your canvas more with effects, work on text and work on blending your focal. (blending your focal ties in with working on effects)
no afunse but it looks like u copy and past that i would belive it if u put your name on it
butnot to be mean
How bout i just give you the psd. Don't think it's legit take a look.
Btw, Thanks for the advice seven
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1VE6RNOC