Lbp

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-CnC-

Text needs improvement IMO.
Good work your improving

thanks, its good to hear that from you, and yea i couldnt find any text that wud work good, so i chose randomly

Looks good.

Only thing that stood out to me, is that the middle of sackboy looks too...pronounced. Like, the rest of him is blended in, and then the middle/focal just stands out a lil too much in my opinion.

depth could be better ;]
Great tag stre.

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Originally Posted by Pain_ELementaL

Looks good.

Only thing that stood out to me, is that the middle of sackboy looks too...pronounced. Like, the rest of him is blended in, and then the middle/focal just stands out a lil too much in my opinion.

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i see what you mean i think its cuz of the huge smile, thanks for the comments
and dillion, i wud have tried adding more depth except for whenever i do, it makes a sig worse for me