First Vector Sig (I think)

[Slimjim0617]

What do you think?

http://i38.tinypic.com/rgy07t.png

[floppybunny]

wow nice job btw if u wanted me to see the girl i didnt see it because the other parts of the sig stood out to me. this was my second time looking at the sig and i finally saw the girl lol

so nice job but if u wanted the girl to be the focal, it didn't work out for me too well.

btw text needs improvement otherwise great job