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[Cereal_Man]

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n172/xzoid/battleJvsMZAvsF.png

[nx.dcr]

that is pretty sweat. the focal is hard to see tho.

[Cereal_Man]

u must be blind

[nx.dcr]

u must be blind

no its just kinda small lol. it looks awsome tho. Im just used to bigger focals i guess. looks really awsome tho

[MZA]

nah
j3ll
that was harsh
and hes right
it IS hard to see

also, the text just (IMO) distracts and kindal kills the flow (even tho u probably put it there to add to the flowwww).....
if ure not to sure about text on a tag - make two versions.....one with no text....the other one with text....
not every tag needs text u know ;)

[floppybunny]

actually my eyes went straight to the focal, thats good =]

i think thte text should be a little over to the left more tho

[Cereal_Man]

ill stay with th3 txt b3caus3 of ripp3rs

[nx.dcr]

Yeah thats true... if you dont put text its almost like giving out your psd cuz its so easy to make it look like its yours when it isnt..