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xWhite_Shadowx
09-23-2008, 11:46 PM
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floppybunny
09-24-2008, 03:19 PM
heeyy actually that looks pretty good! i like it, its blended well. the flow is good!

i just think there should be some lighting and put ur name next to the face of the guy

Cereal_Man
09-24-2008, 03:30 PM
actually there is no flow u can try working on that also try looking at some text tuts

floppybunny
09-24-2008, 03:45 PM
i like the direction of the flow but we r all entitled to our own opinions so oh well

xWhite_Shadowx
09-24-2008, 05:53 PM
Cereal you never have anything good to say? Anyways, I did add lighting trust me the render was a lot darker... and thanks for your opinion flopp

WhoIsYou
09-24-2008, 05:58 PM
I like it, probably your best :) (But i cant remember all of them :S)

MZA
09-24-2008, 06:02 PM
at cereal :P
yeah there is flow :P
although it coul be improved on a lil.....
IMO, the text is kool where it is......it doesnt distract from the focal and it doesnt stand out much - perfect for comething like a name for 'protection'

the gun however seems a lil 'overblended', mainly due to its colour. IMO, it needs to stand out a lil more, but that may just be me....

xWhite_Shadowx
09-24-2008, 06:15 PM
at cereal :P
yeah there is flow :P
although it coul be improved on a lil.....
IMO, the text is kool where it is......it doesnt distract from the focal and it doesnt stand out much - perfect for comething like a name for 'protection'

the gun however seems a lil 'overblended', mainly due to its colour. IMO, it needs to stand out a lil more, but that may just be me....

Yeah I brushed it with a darker orange then added a clipping mask to the render and added a light effect to the chimera's face so it doesn't distract too much but that was probably a mistake...

floppybunny
09-24-2008, 07:26 PM
np wussy =] ahah

anyways, i still thinkthe text could be more next to the face of the kid but i like how its blended and the bg looks cool kinda like smokkey stuff. and still add lighting, since it doesnt look like there is but i believe that the render was much darker

Cereal_Man
09-24-2008, 11:55 PM
i didnt say anything wrong

xWhite_Shadowx
09-25-2008, 12:21 AM
You said there was no flow... and you told me to read a text tutorial that's practically saying "You suck"

soldierkid2057
09-25-2008, 12:37 AM
shoudnt that chimera`s armor b more blacker

Cereal_Man
09-25-2008, 12:56 AM
i just said read a text tut because the text is ok but it can be better and i said there was no flow because there is hardly any so im practically telling u to work on it not that u suck.i never said anything wrong.ur the 1 that thinks that i am saying something wrong

CaNANDian
09-25-2008, 01:01 AM
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