Noob Saibot

[xWhite_Shadowx]

He's a mortal kombat character in case u dont know

http://i206.photobucket.com/albums/bb205/xWhite_Shadowx/Untitled-35copy.png

[Mako-Infused]

nice i love it

[Paint4life]

It looks really good xWSx, except it is wicked hard to read your name. Maybe make it a lil bigger?

[jimmywilldie]

i think its fine

[MZA]

hmmm
with the layer(s) of lighting, erase parts which cover the focal (u dnt have to use a 100% opac. eraser ;) - i'd go for around 50% and go over it again if i need to)....
but i guess thats up to u, cos to me, the focal looks a lil grainy and well......it just doesnt look right IMO.....

other than that, its kool :)

[WhoIsYou]

You like B&W a lot o_O

[floppybunny]

AHHH i hate black and white things!! i love color!! idk a lot of people love black and white its just me, i hate it!!

well anyways

it looks pretty good to me, i would just suggest putting a lighting source, i like the lighting in the backround. also put ur text closer to focallio!