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WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 04:13 AM
^ lol as if -_-

Anyway I actually used a border for once, doesn't make it any better...

So here's the newest piece... (of garbage :D)

http://i36.tinypic.com/9a7khl.png


Anyway please comment, and please tell the truth it won't bother me, criticism will only make me better :)

Oh and I made the background using brushes -_- like usual :)
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Changed text, not great but better.. I think
http://i38.tinypic.com/v8dgdj.png
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Revamped after feedback
http://i37.tinypic.com/e8r9k8.png

Cereal_Man
08-11-2008, 04:18 AM
text is bad work on that

ANBU-grimm
08-11-2008, 04:30 AM
i like sephoroth standing but the back pic is kinda blurry

WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 04:38 AM
text is bad work on that
Think it's better now :P I hope..
http://i38.tinypic.com/v8dgdj.png



i like sephoroth standing but the back pic is kinda blurry

That would be because I blurred the background as t stuck out too much, and faded the back sephiroth out... So the main focus is on the big one..

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What else needs changing :)

ANBU-grimm
08-11-2008, 05:11 AM
I LIKE THAT SO MUCH that if u make me a good one ill pay point

MZA
08-11-2008, 07:40 AM
hmmmm
TBH, i'd say just scrap the text altogetha :P

also, the whole thing does look low quality :S.....

with the border, it looks OKAY-ish.......to make it look a lil better, ATM, it has parts of the actual sig covering it, so its not silver all the way around.......make it so its all the same - should make it look better.....

u have the basics in the bag
now just push a lil bit more to get the hang of developing ure backgrounds......
try starting with smudging the render/stock to make a background......use differant smudge settings for differant fx....

just go wild and then u'll know what things work best :)

WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 07:45 AM
Thanks for the advice :) I'll work on something :D

Cereal_Man
08-11-2008, 08:11 AM
what if who was adding depth to the sig

MZA
08-11-2008, 08:38 AM
hmmm
but even if he was - no offense @ who.......it didnt work very well.......
thats because the focal is also blurred and low quality......

WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 08:40 AM
hmmm
but even if he was - no offense @ who.......it didnt work very well.......
thats because the focal is also blurred and low quality......


I only blurred the bg btw :s

WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 09:36 AM
Okay well I took a bit of everyone's advice and made something new, same idea though.
So what I did,
Cereal - Changed the text
SonniE - (not posted) fixed size
Grimm - Not blurred :D (smudged tho)
MZA - a lot.. took the render off the border, of course the big seph does have to pass over on top.., worked with the render to make the bg rather than just doing whatever,
Fixed border so it's more constant (Although different from the other one)

I was going to add something else but I couldn't get it right, maybe in the future though.. anyway here it is..

#3
http://i37.tinypic.com/e8r9k8.png

MZA
08-11-2008, 09:54 AM
the bg - IMO, is a lot better
the previous one was too chaotic for me :)
border is sweet and im glad the bg isnt blurred.....
its still obvious what the focal is though - which is of course a good thing :)


EDIT:
although the bg does need a lil bit more.....no too much so its like the previous one, but just a little.......
and yeah - i know u prob. didnt blur the focal (big seph), but it still looks low quality :P

WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 10:00 AM
I guess because it's small, and I did a bit of shadowing :D
But come on.. It's Sephiroth :D

As for the bg, what do you mean exactly by "a little bit more" :D a little bit more what :( I can't read minds :(

Cereal_Man
08-11-2008, 10:25 AM
do u know what a focal is or do i explain it to u

WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 10:35 AM
do u know what a focal is or do i explain it to u

I believe I know what it is :S

MZA
08-11-2008, 11:13 AM
a focal is the thing that your eyes should concentrate on most.....
it is the main part of the sig :)

anyhow
when i sai 'a lil bit more' - i meant that ATM, its a little empty......u 'over-smudged' the render so that the bg is just.....boring....
next time......dont totally smudge it so that there is no texture, u want the smudge strokes to be seen :)

WhoIsYou
08-11-2008, 11:47 AM
Focal - Mhmm that's what I thought.

Bg- meh ah well.. first time i did it, can't be perfect >_<

Scruffy120
08-11-2008, 12:26 PM
FF for the win!!

MAD Industries
08-11-2008, 12:41 PM
Third one = Much better. =]