New nubish shit

[Syphongamer08]

My latest stuff. Open to critiquing (you to seven) you can be harsh idc. Its a start though

http://i606.photobucket.com/albums/tt145/Holliman45/Bioshock.jpg

[seven]

Sooo this is just a render on a background?
Try blend your focal a bit add effects areound it such as fractal, c4ds or brushes. Your text is not needed here but it does kind of hide the negative space a bit. But if your going to ever put text on a tag NEVER put outer glow on it, the chances of outerglow looking good on a tag is like 0.01%

Overall: Fill your canvas more with effects, work on text and work on blending your focal. (blending your focal ties in with working on effects)

[ACiiD TRiiP]

no afunse but it looks like u copy and past that i would belive it if u put your name on it


butnot to be mean

[Syphongamer08]

How bout i just give you the psd. Don't think it's legit take a look.

Btw, Thanks for the advice seven

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=1VE6RNOC