New work

[Cereal_Man]

cnc?
http://i40.tinypic.com/24mgf2c.jpg

[seven]

This has no real eye catching effects or attractive colours its pritty dull.. the text doesn't fit at all if your going to add text then I suggest you make it smaller, closer to the focal and in a more plain font.

Overall: work on effects, colours and text.

[MZA]

IMO, the colours work well, but just to be more vibrant in places

all in all, it does seem kinda empty and like 7 said, the text needs working on a bit....

TBH, not you're best, but still looks pretty hawt :P

[Cereal_Man]

thanks.lol
ive been trying new things