Lbp

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-CnC-

[Cereal_Man]

Text needs improvement IMO.
Good work your improving

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thanks, its good to hear that from you, and yea i couldnt find any text that wud work good, so i chose randomly

[Pain_ELementaL]

Looks good.

Only thing that stood out to me, is that the middle of sackboy looks too...pronounced. Like, the rest of him is blended in, and then the middle/focal just stands out a lil too much in my opinion.

[nx.dcr]

depth could be better ;]
Great tag stre.

[__STRELOK__]

Looks good.

Only thing that stood out to me, is that the middle of sackboy looks too...pronounced. Like, the rest of him is blended in, and then the middle/focal just stands out a lil too much in my opinion.

i see what you mean i think its cuz of the huge smile, thanks for the comments
and dillion, i wud have tried adding more depth except for whenever i do, it makes a sig worse for me